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Hate This Nice

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i chewed it up
i spat it out
we follow that;
the things we cant;
it takes much time,
to build rome again

she fell in a day.

i wrote over something named zealous;
i was told by a new toy old,
a feeling i bought -
the one you sold,
to this nomadic soul...

my eyes sit flat,
colors sucking on you;
if i blow this kiss inside
will the air make you explode?
transmissions cutting the atmosphere;
my breath melts ice
isnt hate so very nice?








Hate This Nice
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supul-sinac's avatar
wow... this is incredible... especially the ending is great... the sense of hatred really permeates the whole thing subtly, instead of jumping out and saying "SCREW YOU, MAN" which isnt very poetic, but often seems to happen round here... but i digress... i like the rome thing as well, she fell in a day... overall another great poem :) (Smile)

:o (Eek) If you want peace then live alone. If you want to hide then find a stage. Each a brief but perfect home, to accommodate your rage. :o (Eek)